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Guptavandy Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Sentence corretion

how can we edit the following sentence. I think there is a problem of parallelism:

Media both perpetuate identities to the public and are receptors of an ideology created and sustained within society
  

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guptavandy Media both perpetuate identities to the public and are receptors of an ideology created and sustained within society The sentence is quiet dense with ideas, but I'd say it's grammatically correct. It's okay to do something and be something. Mary both does my laundry and is my wife.

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  • guptavandy Media both perpetuate identities to the public and are receptors of an ideology created and sustained within society The sentence is quiet dense with ideas, but I'd say it's grammatically correct.
  • It's okay to do something and be something.
  • Mary both does my laundry and is my wife.
  • If your goal is to make your sentence clear, I'd suggest using two sentences.
  • The media does A .
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guptavandyMedia both perpetuate identities to the public and are receptors of an ideology created and sustained within society
The sentence is quiet dense with ideas, but I'd say it's grammatically correct.

It's okay to do something and be something.

Mary both does my laundry and is my wife.

If your goal is to ma
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