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Guptavandy Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
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Rather than debating the merits of talent management and its conceptual and intellectual boundaries, we will tell about the demerits.
Should the above sentence be edited as : Rather than debating the merits and conceptual and intellectual boundaries of talent management, we will tell about the demerits.
or is it okay?
Should the above sentence be edited as : Rather than debating the merits and conceptual and intellectual boundaries of talent management, we will tell about the demerits.
or is it okay?
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Either version works, but you need the verb 'speak/write/discuss' [not 'tell'].
- Either version works, but you need the verb 'speak/write/discuss' [not 'tell'].
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Either version works, but you need the verb 'speak/write/discuss' [not 'tell'].
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