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Vsuresh Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correctness

Hi

I have a question on this sentence.

It (a particular technology) is applied in a wide range of applications that include medical diagnosis, GIS, and relational database/medical diagnosis, GIS, relational database among others.

I would like to know if either is OK.

  

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a wide range of applications that include medical diagnosis, GIS[,] and relational database design. a wide range of applications that include medical diagnosis, GIS[,] and relational database design, among others. "that include ...

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  • a wide range of applications that include medical diagnosis, GIS[,] and relational database design.
  • a wide range of applications that include medical diagnosis, GIS[,] and relational database design, among others.
  • "that include ...
  • relational database" is wrong.
  • At minimum it should be "relational databases", but it may read better if you can think of another word to go after "relational database".
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... a wide range of applications that include medical diagnosis, GIS[,] and relational database design.

... a wide range of applications that include medical diagnosis, GIS[,] and relational database design, among others.

"that include ... relational database" is wrong. At minimum it should be "relational databases", but it may read better if you can think of another

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It (a particular technology) is used in a wide range of applications that include medicine (diagnoses), relational database design/operation? and Geographical Information Systems.

How is it used in relational databases? You should be more specific.

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