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Vsuresh Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correctness

Hi

Please tell me if this sentence is correct.

Forty per cent of the population would be willing to pay more for a product if they could experience it through virtual reality.

  

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It's okay, but I think the sentence would be more natural if you use "check it out" instead of "experience it".

  • It's okay, but I think the sentence would be more natural if you use "check it out" instead of "experience it".
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It's okay, but I think the sentence would be more natural if you use "check it out" instead of "experience it".

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vsuresh

Hi

Please tell me if this sentence is correct.

Forty per cent of the population would be willing to pay more for a product if they could experience it through virtual reality.

It's fine. It's a second conditional. Essentially, 'could' = 'were able to' in the given context (or 'had the opportunit

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