Sentence correctness
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Please tell me if I am correct in the changes I have made in the sentence.
(It is a from a letter in the Letters to the Editor column in a daily in our place)
To have/Having an absolute majority and restraining views put forth by intellectuals and not listening to common man is also an undeclared emergency.
Please give your opinion on the style. I think native speakers do not normally go for such convoluted constructions.
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vsuresh Please tell me if I am correct in the changes I have made in the sentence. Your changes are fine, but frankly, I don't know what the writer is trying to convey, even with your corrections. Maybe it's the lack of context.
- vsuresh Please tell me if I am correct in the changes I have made in the sentence.
- Your changes are fine, but frankly, I don't know what the writer is trying to convey, even with your corrections.
- Maybe it's the lack of context.
- Maybe not.
- vsuresh Please give your opinion on the style.
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vsureshPlease tell me if I am correct in the changes I have made in the sentence.
Your changes are fine, but frankly, I don't know what the writer is trying to convey, even with your corrections. Maybe it's the lack of context. Maybe not.
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