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Leeyoung Posted 22 years ago
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1.Again, fashion rule for what is considered as the beautiful for male and female form.
2.Classical painting idealizes that the mythological ladies such as Venus show them with strong shoulder, thick waist, and fleshy thigh.
3.The beautiful girls today must be thin and beanpole.
4.A well-muscle man yesterday gave in place of narrow-shoulder and lean weaking object to female admiration.
5.Not always, however, Japanese lady seems to look at adoring eyes in Sumo wrestler and carries up thirty tones, surplus fat need to eat disgust the quantities of food.
6.Perhaps these ladies bring up the birth to admire men.
7.Tradition also affect on our concept of beauty.
8.There is a strong movement in English that lead Price of Wales reverts Georgian in neo-classical style of architecture.
9.Some claims this style unit more town in countryside than other.
10.The equally large number admires completely new architectural concept that make it possible for modern building materials.
11.Two outlooks can not be reconciled.
12. Some principles apply contrasting views of art, sculpture and music.

Does these sentences incorrect? The use of work or grammar , structure of sentence....
make your correction! all of sentences need to link to each other to make sence!
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I hope this helps you. ) The fashion industry makes the rules as to what is considered physically beautiful for both males and females. ) Classical paintings of mythological ladies such as Venus idealize traits such as strong shoulders, thick waists, and fleshy thighs.

  • I hope this helps you.
  • ) The fashion industry makes the rules as to what is considered physically beautiful for both males and females.
  • ) Classical paintings of mythological ladies such as Venus idealize traits such as strong shoulders, thick waists, and fleshy thighs.
  • ) Today, beanpole-thin girls are considered beautiful by many.
  • Not sure about the hyphen there.
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Here goes my try at this...I hope this helps you.

1.) The fashion industry makes the rules as to what is considered physically beautiful for both males and females.

2.) Classical paintings of mythological ladies such as Venus idealize traits such as strong shoulders, thick waists, and fleshy thighs.

3.) Today, beanpole-thin girls are considered beautiful by many.

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