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Tinanam0102 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Sentence corrections
Hi teachers,
Would you correct the following sentences? Thank you.
Mr. Kim is the consultant of a company.
1. Generally, a consultant's fee is made every quarter of a year to Mr. Kim.
2. A consultant's fee for the third quarter was made to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.
3. A consultant's fee in the third quarter was made to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.
4. Consultant payment for Mr. Kim has been made today for the third quarter of this year.
Thanks again
Tinanam
Would you correct the following sentences? Thank you.
Mr. Kim is the consultant of a company.
1. Generally, a consultant's fee is made every quarter of a year to Mr. Kim.
2. A consultant's fee for the third quarter was made to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.
3. A consultant's fee in the third quarter was made to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.
4. Consultant payment for Mr. Kim has been made today for the third quarter of this year.
Thanks again
Tinanam
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I have underlined some problems: 1. Generally, a consultant's fee is made every quarter of a year to Mr. Kim.
- I have underlined some problems: 1.
- Generally, a consultant's fee is made every quarter of a year to Mr.
- Kim.
- 2.
- A consultant's fee for the third quarter was made to Mr.
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I have underlined some problems:
1. Generally, a consultant's fee is made every quarterof a year to Mr. Kim.
2. A consultant's fee for the third quarter was made to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.
3. A consultant's fee in the third quarter was made to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachmen
1. Generally, a consultant's fee is made every quarter
2. A consultant's fee for the third quarter was made to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.
3. A consultant's fee in the third quarter was made to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachmen
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Dear Mr. Micawber,
Thank you for your help. Would you check #1 and #2 revision below? Thanks
1. Generally, a consultant's fee is paid every quarter to Mr. Kim.
2. A consultant's fee for the third quarter was paid to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.
>>I'd like to know the preposition in is wrong in "A consultant's fee
Thank you for your help. Would you check #1 and #2 revision below? Thanks
1. Generally, a consultant's fee is paid every quarter to Mr. Kim.
2. A consultant's fee for the third quarter was paid to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.
>>I'd like to know the preposition in is wrong in "A consultant's fee
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1. Generally, a consultant's fee is paid every quarter to Mr. Kim.-- OK
2. A consultant's fee for the third quarter was paid to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.-- OK
I'd like to know the preposition in is wrong in "A consultant's fee in third quarter" is wrong?- Yes, wrong; use 'for'.
Is "Consultant payment" wrong?-- Sounds odd
2. A consultant's fee for the third quarter was paid to Mr. Kim yesterday. Please check the attachment.-- OK
I'd like to know the preposition in is wrong in "A consultant's fee in third quarter" is wrong?- Yes, wrong; use 'for'.
Is "Consultant payment" wrong?-- Sounds odd
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Hi Mister Micawber,
I'm sorry I forgot to ask one question.
1. Would you please tell me why "a consultant's fee is made to Mr. Kim" where "made" is a problem?
2. Is "There will be on charge made on the extra batteries" correct?
Thank you.
Tinanam
I'm sorry I forgot to ask one question.
1. Would you please tell me why "a consultant's fee is made to Mr. Kim" where "made" is a problem?
2. Is "There will be on charge made on the extra batteries" correct?
Thank you.
Tinanam
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1. Would you please tell me why "a consultant's fee is made to Mr. Kim" where "made" is a problem?-- 'Made' is the wrong verb. We don't 'make fees', though we do 'make payments'.
2. Is "There will be on charge made on the extra batteries" correct?-- I don't think so. Are you talking about money ('there'll be a charge for...') or about electricity ('the batteries'll be
2. Is "There will be on charge made on the extra batteries" correct?-- I don't think so. Are you talking about money ('there'll be a charge for...') or about electricity ('the batteries'll be
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Hi Mister Micawber,
It's about money. I'm sorry it should be "no charge" made on the extra batteries. The customer wrote and asked if he could get the extra batteries free.
I'd like to know if (as in money) a charge can be made. What preposition goes with "charge" here.
Thank you.
Tinanam
It's about money. I'm sorry it should be "no charge" made on the extra batteries. The customer wrote and asked if he could get the extra batteries free.
I'd like to know if (as in money) a charge can be made. What preposition goes with "charge" here.
Thank you.
Tinanam
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I've already told you:
Are you talking about money ('there'll be a charge for...')
Are you talking about money ('there'll be a charge for...')
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