0
Spooner Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Sentence correction please

There are couple of idiomatic expressions in the below sentence, which I wrote, that I am not sure of their grammatical correctness.

Would someone kindly elaborate on the sentence below and see if there is any awkwardness?

Seoul’s Myungdong, which ranked as 8th most expensive shopping district in the world last year, took a little downfall(?), landing 9th in this year's poll, while New York’s 5th avenue continued to enjoy its reign as the most expensive shopping street for 10 straight years.

Thanks in advance.
  

Top answer

Hello, Spooner - and welcome to English Forums. Seoul’s Myungdong, which ranked as the 8th most expensive shopping district in the world last year, took a little spill , landing 9th in this year's poll, while New York’s 5th Avenue continued to enjoy its reign as the most expensive shopping street for the 10th straight year.

  • Hello, Spooner - and welcome to English Forums.
  • Seoul’s Myungdong, which ranked as the 8th most expensive shopping district in the world last year, took a little spill , landing 9th in this year's poll, while New York’s 5th Avenue continued to enjoy its reign as the most expensive shopping street for the 10th straight year.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
Hello, Spooner - and welcome to English Forums.

Seoul’s Myungdong, which ranked as the 8th most expensive shopping district in the world last year, took a little spill, landing 9th in this year's poll, while New York’s 5th Avenue continued to enjoy its reign as the most expensive shopping street for the 10th straight year.

Related Questions