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Mekkalomp Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Sentence Correction Clauses

Could somebody correct the grammar of the following two sentences?

Joe, who is a crazy guy, loves to play soccer, more than basketball, every night but not when it rains.

Crazy Joe loves to play soccer much more than basketball every night, but when it rains, he doesn't like to play soccer.
  

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Joe, who is a crazy guy, loves to play soccer more than basketball every night, but not when it rains. Crazy Joe loves to play soccer much more than basketball every night, but when it rains he doesn't like to play soccer.

— Mister Micawber

  • Joe, who is a crazy guy, loves to play soccer more than basketball every night, but not when it rains.
  • Crazy Joe loves to play soccer much more than basketball every night, but when it rains he doesn't like to play soccer.
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Joe, who is a crazy guy, loves to play soccer more than basketball every night, but not when it rains.
Crazy Joe loves to play soccer much more than basketball every night, but when it rains he doesn't like to play soccer.
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Thanks! Is there a difference in meaning between those sentences? I think the first sentence is a bit ambiguous.
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mekkalompIs there a difference in meaning between those sentences?
Yes.
mekkalompI think the first sentence is a bit ambiguous.
In what way?
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