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Silak12 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correction?

Hi, everyone.

How can this sentence be improved?

We have become just like them who wish one another "Christmas" only through whatsapp status; we feel awkward to orally wish each other this day when that person was born for whose sake this universe was created.

Thanks!

  

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I think it will be OK with a few changes: We have become just like those who wish one another "Christmas" only through W hatsapp status; we feel awkward /uncomfortable to orally wish each other this day, the birthday of the person for whose sake this universe was created.

  • I think it will be OK with a few changes: We have become just like those who wish one another "Christmas" only through W hatsapp status; we feel awkward /uncomfortable to orally wish each other this day, the birthday of the person for whose sake this universe was created.
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I think it will be OK with a few changes:

We have become just like those who wish one another "Christmas" only through Whatsapp status; we feel awkward /uncomfortable to orally wish each other this day, the birthday of the person for whose sake this

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