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The invention of TV has completely changed entertainment in the modern world, making it more passive and, thus, less socially interactive. Today, a lot of channels are dedicating long hours to kids programs causing controversy to our society as to whether parents should place restriction on the time spent in front of a screen.
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anonymous Does this sentence make sense to you? Yes, but it's a bit of a mess. The invention of TV utterly changed entertainment, making it less socially interactive.
- anonymous Does this sentence make sense to you?
- Yes, but it's a bit of a mess.
- The invention of TV utterly changed entertainment, making it less socially interactive.
- Today, a lot of channels dedicate many hours to kids' programs, causing controversy as to whether parents should place restrictions on time spent in front of the screen.
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anonymousDoes this sentence make sense to you?
Yes, but it's a bit of a mess.
The invention of TV utterly changed entertainment, making it less socially interactive. Today, a lot of channels dedicate many hours to kids' programs, causing controversy as to whether parents should place restrictions on time spent in front of the screen.
0It makes sense, but it isn't well written.
The invention of TV has completely changed entertainment in the modern world, making it more passive and, thus, less socially interactive. Today, a lot of channels dedicate hours to kids' programs causing a controversy in our society regarding whether parents should place restrictions on the amount of time children should spend in front of the T
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