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The invention of TV has completely changed entertainment in the modern world, making it more passive and, thus, less socially interactive. Today, a lot of channels are dedicating long hours to kids programs causing controversy to our society as to whether parents should place restriction on the time spent in front of a screen.

  

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The invention of TV has completely changed entertainment in the modern world, making it more passive and, thus, less soci able. lly interactive. Today, a lot of channels are dedicating long hours to kid s' program s, causing controversy to in our society as to whether parents should place restriction on restrict/limit the time spent in front of the screen.

  • The invention of TV has completely changed entertainment in the modern world, making it more passive and, thus, less soci able.
  • lly interactive.
  • Today, a lot of channels are dedicating long hours to kid s' program s, causing controversy to in our society as to whether parents should place restriction on restrict/limit the time spent in front of the screen.
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The invention of TV has completely changed entertainment in the modern world, making it more passive and, thus, less sociable. lly interactive. Today, a lot of channels are dedicating long hours to kids' programs, causing controversy to

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