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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Sentence correction
Hello. In the following sentence I am trying to express my view that students lacking motivation study under the pressure of their parents.
Is it correct to put it this way?
"Their studying is merely driven by their parents' pressure and expectation to fulfill their lost dreams"
Thank you.
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anonymous . In the following sentence I am trying to express my view that students lacking motivation study under the pressure of their parents. — Their study is merely driven by their parents' pressure.
- anonymous .
- In the following sentence I am trying to express my view that students lacking motivation study under the pressure of their parents.
- — Their study is merely driven by their parents' pressure.
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anonymous. In the following sentence I am trying to express my view that students lacking motivation study under the pressure of their parents.
Then why have you added the last, seemingly irrelevant phrase?—
Their study is merely driven by their parents' pressure.
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