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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Hello. Could you please help me with the following sentences? I am not sure if they are correct.

1.Nowadays the world diverges from the old fashioned values such as kindness and trust towards a more materialistic direction.

2. They seem to form their social circle with people who share similar values and lead their life towards the same path. (that of materialism)

Thank you in advance.
  

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Nowadays the world is diverging in a more materialistic direction from old-fashioned virtues such as kindness and trust. Their social circle seems to be formed of p eople who share similar values and walk the same path of materialism.

  • Nowadays the world is diverging in a more materialistic direction from old-fashioned virtues such as kindness and trust.
  • Their social circle seems to be formed of p eople who share similar values and walk the same path of materialism.
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Nowadays the world is diverging in a more materialistic direction from old-fashioned virtues such as kindness and trust.

Their social circle seems to be formed of people who share similar values and walk the same path of materialism.
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Mister MicawberNowadays the world is diverging in a more materialistic direction from old-fashioned virtues such as kindness and trust.Their social circle seems to be formed of people who share similar values and walk the same path of materialism.
Thank you so much.

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