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BrianMendonsa Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correction

Hello! Can you please correct the following paragraph --> I was born and brought up in Dukhan,Qatar. Being born here, gave me an opportunity to participate in Qatar's prestigious clubs. Presently i play for the club 'Al Rayyan SC'. I train and play table tennis in Al Rayyan SC. I enjoy training with an international coach who is from Belarus.
  

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I was born and brought up in Dukhan ,Q atar. Being born ( raised is better than born ) here, (no comma) gave me an opportunity to participate in Qatar's prestigious clubs. Presently i play for the club 'Al Rayyan SC'.

— AlpheccaStars

  • I was born and brought up in Dukhan ,Q atar.
  • Being born ( raised is better than born ) here, (no comma) gave me an opportunity to participate in Qatar's prestigious clubs.
  • Presently i play for the club 'Al Rayyan SC'.
  • I train and play table tennis in Al Rayyan SC.
  • I enjoy training with an international coach who is from Belarus.
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I was born and brought up in Dukhan,Qatar. Being born (raised is better than born) here, (no comma) gave me an opportunity to participate in Qatar's prestigious clubs. Presently i play for the club 'Al Rayyan SC'. I train and play table tennis in Al Rayyan SC. I enjoy training
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I was born and brought up in Dukhan,Qatar. Being born here (no comma here - "being" is a gerund, not a participle) gave me an opportunity to participate in Qatar's prestigious clubs. Presently i (capitalize I) play for the club Al Rayyan SC Club. I train and play table tennis
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Thank you, AlpheccaStars
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