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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Sentence correction
Hello. Could you proofread the following sentences, please?
When choosing a course of study, the most important factors to consider are being competitive and whether it is relevant to the career you want to pursue.
Unemployment increases the level of competition to personal qualifications.
Thank you in advance.
When choosing a course of study, the most important factors to consider are being competitive and whether it is relevant to the career you want to pursue.
Unemployment increases the level of competition to personal qualifications.
Thank you in advance.
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What do you mean by "being competitive" in the first sentence? The meaning of your second sentence is unclear.
- What do you mean by "being competitive" in the first sentence?
- The meaning of your second sentence is unclear.
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What do you mean by "being competitive" in the first sentence?
The meaning of your second sentence is unclear.
The meaning of your second sentence is unclear.
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By "being competitive" I mean it is important that the course of study makes you competitive for the career you want to pursue.
In the second sentence I want to say that unemployment increases the level of competition in terms of qualifications (that is, skills which can be certified and those which can't).
In the second sentence I want to say that unemployment increases the level of competition in terms of qualifications (that is, skills which can be certified and those which can't).
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AnonymousWhen choosing a course of study, the most important factors to consider areI'm still unclear as to what you want to say in your second sentence.being competitive andwhether it is relevant to the career you want to pursue, and if it will provide you with a competitive advantage in finding a suitable job.
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