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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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A bird sitting on a tree is never afraid of the branch breaking,because her trust is not on the branch but on its own wings. As soon as you trust yourself,you will know how to live.

Is anything wrong their? Like preposition or others?
  

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Anonymous her trust is not on the branch but on its own wings. I'd suggest you be consistent with references. Make them feminine or neutral, but don't mix them.

— Philip

  • Anonymous her trust is not on the branch but on its own wings.
  • I'd suggest you be consistent with references.
  • Make them feminine or neutral, but don't mix them.
  • Correction: Is there anything wrong?
  • I find this to be a nice sentiment.
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Anonymousher trust is not on the branch but on its own wings.
I'd suggest you be consistent with references. Make them feminine or neutral, but don't mix them. Correction: Is there anything wrong? I find this to be a nice sentiment.
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. . . trust is not in the branch but in its own wings.

One place's one's trust in something/somebody.

Clive
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AnonymousA bird sitting on a tree is never afraid of the branch breaking,because her
Unless you first establish that you are talking about a female bird, the word her, makes no sense. How is anyone other than you to know that it is a female, unless you establish that first? Unless you do that, the word its, wou
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