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Ddnd Posted 11 years ago
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sentence correction
Could you please correct the following sentences?
Having a mentally ill person at home leads to the fear that marriage proposals might not be accepted and the frustration of close relatives experience looking after the mentally ill person ,all lead to the abandonment of the person.
Having a mentally ill person at home leads to the fear that marriage proposals might not be accepted and the frustration of close relatives experience looking after the mentally ill person ,all lead to the abandonment of the person.
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Could you please correct the following sentences? You have written it all as one sentence. eg Having a mentally ill person at home leads to the fear that marriage proposals might not be accepted and to the frustration of close relatives who experience looking after the mentally ill person.
- Could you please correct the following sentences?
- You have written it all as one sentence.
- eg Having a mentally ill person at home leads to the fear that marriage proposals might not be accepted and to the frustration of close relatives who experience looking after the mentally ill person.
- All of this leads to the abandonment of the person.
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Could you please correct the following sentences? You have written it all as one sentence.
eg Having a mentally ill person at home leads to the fear that marriage proposals might not be accepted and to the frustration of close relatives who experience looking after the mentally ill person. All of this leads to the abandonmen
eg Having a mentally ill person at home leads to the fear that marriage proposals might not be accepted and to the frustration of close relatives who experience looking after the mentally ill person. All of this leads to the abandonmen
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ddndCould you please correct the following sentences?You have one sentence there, but I think you tried to express several ideas.
Here is a suggestion. Is this what you mean?
There are two reasons why a mentally ill person would be abandoned by their close relatives. First, the family would fear that the stigma of having a mentally ill relative w
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