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Aoymee2 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

sentence correction

Hello. Does the following sound correct?

I was just wondering if it’s possible, would I be able to intern at the XX company instead of a part time work/job?

I was just wondering if it’s possible, would I be able to intern at the XX company instead of having a part time work/job?

Thank you
  

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aoymee2 Does the following sound correct? No; they are run-on sentences. Would I be able to intern at XX Company instead of having a part time job?

— Mister Micawber

  • aoymee2 Does the following sound correct?
  • No; they are run-on sentences.
  • Would I be able to intern at XX Company instead of having a part time job?
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aoymee2Does the following sound correct?
No; they are run-on sentences.

Would I be able to intern at XX Company instead of having a part time job?
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Does run-on sentence mean sentences with incorrect punctuation?
So is it wrong to say:
'I was just wondering if it’s possible,......'
before
Would I be able to intern at XX Company instead of having a part time job?

Thank you
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aoymee2Does run-on sentence mean sentences with incorrect punctuation?
It means incorrect construction: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
aoymee2'I was just wondering if it’s possible...would I be able
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