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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correction

"Swimming is a great exercise because you are Moving againt the water's resistence, which is over ten times than that of the air."

Is the above sentence correct, specifically after the comma? Do u have any other auggeations

Thanks in advance!
  

Top answer

Swimming is a great exercise because you are m oving again s t the water's resist a nce, which is [ over ten times than / more than ten times ] that of the air .

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  • Swimming is a great exercise because you are m oving again s t the water's resist a nce, which is [ over ten times than / more than ten times ] that of the air .
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Swimming is a great exercise because you are moving against the water's resistance, which is [over ten times than / more than ten times] that of the air.
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Thanks.
Just to double check, so the wording after the comma, "which is over ten times than that of the air", is correct and makes sense?

Thanks again!
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AnonymousJust to double check, so the wording after the comma, "which is over ten times than that of the air", is correct and makes sense?
No. See my post above (which I’ve edited).
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Just a passing comment..
I would say: " which is ten times greater than air ".
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