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Vsuresh Posted 12 years ago
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sentence correction

Hi

Please tell me if this is meaningful and point out the grammatical errors as well.

In the recent times we have been witnessing cases of student misbehaviour quite often. The reason for this, I think, is the whole edifice of school education being too bent for the sake of children. which is obviously being abused by children who have fallen into bad ways due to various reasons.
  

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I think this is what you mean: Recently we have been witnessing frequent cases of student misbehaviour. The reason for this, I think, is that the whole edifice of school education has been redirected toward the convenience of the students, and this is obviously being abused by those who have fallen into bad ways.

  • I think this is what you mean: Recently we have been witnessing frequent cases of student misbehaviour.
  • The reason for this, I think, is that the whole edifice of school education has been redirected toward the convenience of the students, and this is obviously being abused by those who have fallen into bad ways.
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I think this is what you mean:

Recently we have been witnessing frequent cases of student misbehaviour. The reason for this, I think, is that the whole edifice of school education has been redirected toward the convenience of the students, and this is obviously being abused by those who have fallen into bad ways.
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Mister MicawberI think this is what you mean:
Yes. The changes are very helpful.

Thank you,sir.

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