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IQCat Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance
Sentence correction
Hey,
does this sentence sound natural or does it make sense? Thanks for any corrections!
"Regarding the redevelopment of hardware for new products and the following production, collaboration with a production partner has been accelerated more strongly in order to attain more favourable purchasing terms by the bulk."
does this sentence sound natural or does it make sense? Thanks for any corrections!
"Regarding the redevelopment of hardware for new products and the following production, collaboration with a production partner has been accelerated more strongly in order to attain more favourable purchasing terms by the bulk."
Top answer
You need to try to say it more simply. Consider using more than one sentence.
- You need to try to say it more simply.
- Consider using more than one sentence.
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You need to try to say it more simply. Consider using more than one sentence.
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What would you suggest? I can't think of where to split the sentence..
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"Regarding the redevelopment of hardware for new products and the following production, collaboration with a production partner has been accelerated more strongly in order to attain more favourable purchasing terms by the bulk."
eg "Regarding the redevelopment of hardware for new products and the following production, we are going to speed up our collaboratio
eg "Regarding the redevelopment of hardware for new products and the following production, we are going to speed up our collaboratio
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