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Hello. I've written an essay on technology ,and more particularly on automation, but I am not sure whether the sentences below are correct. Could you please help me?
1)Consequently, automation may lead us to a great booming and, why not, to another admirable progression in history.
2) Automation, which is part of pioneering technology, does not only mean less-or even at all-staff in the workplace. It also entails more ingenious machines, and as a result what was once considered state-of-the-art will be obsolete in the future.
3) In case of an accident, the destruction of ecosystems will just be a small introduction compared to what will happen next.
1)Consequently, automation may lead us to a great booming and, why not, to another admirable progression in history.
2) Automation, which is part of pioneering technology, does not only mean less-or even at all-staff in the workplace. It also entails more ingenious machines, and as a result what was once considered state-of-the-art will be obsolete in the future.
3) In case of an accident, the destruction of ecosystems will just be a small introduction compared to what will happen next.
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1) Consequently, automation may lead us to an economic boom and another great advance in history. 2) Automation, a pioneering technology, does not only mean fewer or no staff in the workplac e; it also entails more ingenious machine s. As a result , what was once considered state-of-the-art will be obsolete in the future.
- 1) Consequently, automation may lead us to an economic boom and another great advance in history.
- 2) Automation, a pioneering technology, does not only mean fewer or no staff in the workplac e; it also entails more ingenious machine s.
- As a result , what was once considered state-of-the-art will be obsolete in the future.
- 3) If there is an accident, the destruction of ecosystems will just be a small prelude to what will happen next.
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1) Consequently, automation may lead us to an economic boom and another great advance in history.
2) Automation, a pioneering technology, does not only mean fewer or no staff in the workplace; it also entails more ingenious machines. As a result, what was once considered state-of-the-art will be obsolete in the future.
2) Automation, a pioneering technology, does not only mean fewer or no staff in the workplace; it also entails more ingenious machines. As a result, what was once considered state-of-the-art will be obsolete in the future.
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