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Csckid Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

sentence correction

Please correct the sentence below

Confucious. The great thinker. But I think he looks more confused than his thinking ability.
  

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This is written in a fragmentary style is OK in very casual English. But I don't understand the meaning of part #3. Do you?

  • This is written in a fragmentary style is OK in very casual English.
  • But I don't understand the meaning of part #3.
  • Do you?
  • Clive
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This is written in a fragmentary style is OK in very casual English.

But I don't understand the meaning of part #3. Do you?

Clive
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Confucius. The great thinker. But I think he looks more confused than thoughtful (contemplative.)
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I think part #3 does not compare properly.
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Now I'm more confused than Confucius—where do we see "part 3"?
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csckidI think part #3 does not compare properly.
Yes. The third sentence is not logical. That's why I edited it.
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haha.. part three means the third sentence.

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