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Silak12 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correction?

Hi! everyone.Could you tell me the best way to say this sentence?
,Dogs which are ordained at some things surveillance should seem as much powerful as it develops terror in thieves.
Does "as much as" work here ?
Thanks!
  

Top answer

Hi, Your sentence contains a lot of errors. I don't want to start guessing what you mean. Please try to say it another way.

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Hi,

Your sentence contains a lot of errors. I don't want to start guessing what you mean.
Please try to say it another way.

Clive
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He means dogs obey the rules seem to be more powerful than ones raised by dog stealers ..
I may have even more mistakes than him, plz correct them:p]
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Hi,

I don't think that's what he means.
In addition, what you have written still contains errors and does not make good sense. Sorry.

Clive
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Dogs trained by experts (I mean dog whisperers) are much smarter than ones stolen by bad guys <-- my new try Emotion: big smile
I know that
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Hi,

That's a good sentence.
But it is still not what I think the original means.

Perhaps Silak will tell us. As I said, I don't want to waste my time guessing.

Clive
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Hi! Clive.Sorry for not being able to make you understand.
Can you understand this one?
-Security dogs should seem powerful and healthy enough to scare the thieves.
Is it understandable now?
Thanks!
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Hi,

Security dogs should seem powerful and healthy enough to scare the thieves.

I'd consider 'be' instead of 'seem'.

Clive
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