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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
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Sentence correction

Michael didn't personally approach me, it was one of my ex-colleagues/partners who had approached me, likely because I icould help the team and make the work process flow better.

Please proofread without changing the wording.

Deployment is the risk of joining the military, and I'm willing to take that risk, because it's something I want to accomplish for myself in my life.

Please proofread without changing the wording.

Thank you.
  

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-- An impossible demand.

  • -- An impossible demand.
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Please proofread without changing the wording.-- An impossible demand.
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Mister MicawberPlease proofread without changing the wording.-- An impossible demand.
If that's the case, pleases proofread without changing the context.

Thank you.

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