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Guptavandy Posted 15 years ago
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It should be pointed out that the crude oil PVT properties used in the MBE are appropriate for moderate–low volatility “black oil” systems, which, when produced at the surface, are separated into oil and solution gas.
  

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I think: It should be pointed out that the crude oil PVT properties used in the MBE are appropriate for low-moderate volatility “black oil” systems, which, when produced at the surface, are separated into oil and dissolved gas.

  • I think: It should be pointed out that the crude oil PVT properties used in the MBE are appropriate for low-moderate volatility “black oil” systems, which, when produced at the surface, are separated into oil and dissolved gas.
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I think:

It should be pointed out that the crude oil PVT properties used in the MBE are appropriate for low-moderate volatility “black oil” systems, which, when produced at the surface, are separated into oil and dissolved gas.

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