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Guptavandy Posted 15 years ago
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Does the following sentence require any correction:
Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but these perspectives derive from a truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment.
I edited it like this:
Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but this perspective derives from a truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment
Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but these perspectives derive from a truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment.
I edited it like this:
Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but this perspective derives from a truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment
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Hi, Does the following sentence require any correction: Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but these perspectives derive from a truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment. I edited it like this: I prefer your version, with this small edit. Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but t his perspective derives from the truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment.
- Hi, Does the following sentence require any correction: Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but these perspectives derive from a truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment.
- I edited it like this: I prefer your version, with this small edit.
- Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but t his perspective derives from the truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment.
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Hi,
Does the following sentence require any correction:
Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but these perspectives derive from a truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment.
I edited it like this:
I prefer your version, with this small
Does the following sentence require any correction:
Each media outlet might have a particular perspective that some see as biased, but these perspectives derive from a truncated range of options on offer within a commercial media environment.
I edited it like this:
I prefer your version, with this small
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