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Guptavandy Posted 15 years ago
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One of the principal points of opposition against the present media merger frenzy is the fear that a monolithically owned media will create content that is one-dimensional and therefore lead to a less-informed public.
  

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guptavandy Does this sentence requirer any correction? One of the principal points of opposition against the present media merger frenzy is the fear that a monolithically owned media will create content that is one-dimensional and therefore lead to a less-informed public. Probably not.

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  • guptavandy Does this sentence requirer any correction?
  • One of the principal points of opposition against the present media merger frenzy is the fear that a monolithically owned media will create content that is one-dimensional and therefore lead to a less-informed public.
  • Probably not.
  • The grammar is fine.
  • " It seems like a conceptual mismatch.
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guptavandyDoes this sentence requirer any correction?
One of the principal points of opposition against the present media merger frenzy is the fear that a monolithically owned media will create content that is one-dimensional and therefore lead to a less-informed public.
Probably not. The grammar is fine. (Some might prefer "opposition to t
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