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PreciousJones Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correction

Hi,

My husband devoured his fries quickly to our surprise our server gave us extra fries seeing that my husband had gone through his so fast.

Please check to see if this sentence is grammatically and puncuated correctly. Thanks.
  

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My husband devoured his fries quickly , and to our surprise our server gave us extra fries , seeing that my husband had gone through his so fast.

  • My husband devoured his fries quickly , and to our surprise our server gave us extra fries , seeing that my husband had gone through his so fast.
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My husband devoured his fries quickly, and to our surprise our server gave us extra fries, seeing that my husband had gone through his so fast.

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