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PreciousJones Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correction

Hi,

A DVD recording of the lesson could be leant as a make-up lesson so you can enjoy the class in the comfort of your apartment.

Please proofread and see if this sentence is natural or not.

Thanks
  

Top answer

It's correct, but I find it a bit awkward. You can borrow a DVD recording of the lesson and enjoy the class etc. Is the technical designation "make-up lesson" critical in your sentence?

— Avangi

  • It's correct, but I find it a bit awkward.
  • You can borrow a DVD recording of the lesson and enjoy the class etc.
  • Is the technical designation "make-up lesson" critical in your sentence?
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It's correct, but I find it a bit awkward.

You can borrow a DVD recording of the lesson and enjoy the class etc.

Is the technical designation "make-up lesson" critical in your sentence?
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Sorry, I don't believe "leant" is correct. And even if you mean "loaned," I agree that Avangi's version is better.
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Sorry, Khoff, I must have been tired. I thought it was British. Emotion: embarrassed

Hmmm, he was leant up against the light pole.
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