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Are the following sentences acceptable ?
(1) The boss was a rational person and discovered that the woman had a talent for singing.
(2) Originally, the boss was a music producer, who was hunting for a new star singer.
(3) Therefore, he encouraged her to keep practicing singing and planned to train her to be a successful singer.
(4) Before long, the woman became known as a superstar.
(1) The boss was a rational person and discovered that the woman had a talent for singing.
(2) Originally, the boss was a music producer, who was hunting for a new star singer.
(3) Therefore, he encouraged her to keep practicing singing and planned to train her to be a successful singer.
(4) Before long, the woman became known as a superstar.
Top answer
(1) The boss was perceptive and discovered that the woman had a voice. (2) Originally, he was a music producer who was hunting for a new star. (3) Therefore, he encouraged her to keep practicing.
- (1) The boss was perceptive and discovered that the woman had a voice.
- (2) Originally, he was a music producer who was hunting for a new star.
- (3) Therefore, he encouraged her to keep practicing.
- He planned to advance her career.
- (4) Before long, she became a superstar.
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(1) The boss was perceptive and discovered that the woman had a voice.
(2) Originally, he was a music producer who was hunting for a new star.
(3) Therefore, he encouraged her to keep practicing. He planned to advance her career.
(4) Before long, she became a superstar.
(2) Originally, he was a music producer who was hunting for a new star.
(3) Therefore, he encouraged her to keep practicing. He planned to advance her career.
(4) Before long, she became a superstar.
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