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Contiluo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Sentence correction
Please rewrite the following two sentences in a natural way.
1. Even though I am eighteen years old, my parents still see me as a child.
2. I try as hard as I can to persuade them, but they don't allow me to move out.
1. Even though I am eighteen years old, my parents still see me as a child.
2. I try as hard as I can to persuade them, but they don't allow me to move out.
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1.My parents still see me as a child,even though I am eighteen years old.
2.They do not allow me to move out,dispite trying hard to to persuad them.
2.They do not allow me to move out,dispite trying hard to to persuad them.
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Hi,
In sentence (2), I would write as:
In sentence (2), I would write as:
They do not allow me to move out despite I try hard to persuad them.
How do you think about it?00
Hi,
In sentence (2), I would write as:
It needs to be 'despite something'. eg
In sentence (2), I would write as:
They do not allow me to move out despite I try hard to persuad them.
How do you think about it?It needs to be 'despite something'. eg
They do not allow me to move out despite my persuasion.
They do not allow me to move out despite my attempts to persuade them.
They do not allow me to move out desp
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