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New2grammar Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correction

The box, when opened, will release evil spirits into the world.

Is the sentence grammatically correct?
  

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I would say so. Although I'd prefer this: When opened, the box will release evil spirits into the world. But I certainly don't like how the sentence will sound if stated this way: The box will release evil spirits into the world when opened.

  • I would say so.
  • Although I'd prefer this: When opened, the box will release evil spirits into the world.
  • But I certainly don't like how the sentence will sound if stated this way: The box will release evil spirits into the world when opened.
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I would say so. Although I'd prefer this: When opened, the box will release evil spirits into the world.

But I certainly don't like how the sentence will sound if stated this way: The box will release evil spirits into the world when opened.

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