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Scottyp Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correction

"The trend is fast gaining popularity among prospective home buyers as well as those wanting changes in their existing set up" .

What is the mistake in the above sentence ??? Please give me the reason .
  

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You might want to repeat among before those wanting , and setup is one word, but other than that, it looks good as it stands as far as I can tell. CJ

  • You might want to repeat among before those wanting , and setup is one word, but other than that, it looks good as it stands as far as I can tell.
  • CJ
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You might want to repeat among before those wanting, and setup is one word, but other than that, it looks good as it stands as far as I can tell.

CJ
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the answer says those wanting is wrong and should be replaced by those who want.not able to get the drift of it......can you please take a look and come back.....
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those wanting = those who want

Both are correct. Omitting the who requires you to change want into wanting.

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