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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correction

i want to check whether this sentece is correct, 'one can have shortage of blood if taken too much alcohol'.
  

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The grammar and the logic are both defective. What sort of blood deficiency do you intend to describe? " Your sentence implies a reduction in volume .

  • The grammar and the logic are both defective.
  • What sort of blood deficiency do you intend to describe?
  • " Your sentence implies a reduction in volume .
  • Is that what you mean?
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The grammar and the logic are both defective. What sort of blood deficiency do you intend to describe?

"One can have a shortage of blood if taking too much alcohol."

Your sentence implies a reduction in volume. Is that what you mean?

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