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Rajivme Posted 17 years ago
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We would like to bring to your notice that, this shipment has been gone through the process of loading and unloading more than 12 times during transportation. Your packing is normal polythene packing and it will naturally get loose in this process. We request you to kindly realize this situation and understand that this is not our fault. This number of loading /unloading happened to this particular shipment because of container back to town. To avoid any future problem we suggest you transport your good directly to PanalPina dock warehouse instead of any private warehouse.

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We would like to bring to your notice that this shipment has been loaded and unloaded more than 12 times during transportation; this occurred with this particular shipment because the container returned to the city . Your packing is standar d polythene packing , and it will naturally become loose in this process. To avoid any future problem , we suggest that you transport your goods directly to PanalPina dock warehouse instead of to a private warehouse.

  • We would like to bring to your notice that this shipment has been loaded and unloaded more than 12 times during transportation; this occurred with this particular shipment because the container returned to the city .
  • Your packing is standar d polythene packing , and it will naturally become loose in this process.
  • To avoid any future problem , we suggest that you transport your goods directly to PanalPina dock warehouse instead of to a private warehouse.
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We would like to bring to your notice that this shipment has been loaded and unloaded more than 12 times during transportation; this occurred with this particular shipment because the container returned to the city. Your packing is standard polythene packing, and it will naturally become loose in this process. To avoid any future pro

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