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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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001. "If they do that, they will know the text well enough that 01u00it almost seems memorized02u00, " Max says. 02br
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00Would you say the part underlined could have been written as "it almost will seem memorized" as to take the time-frame to the future? 02br
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002. The concert started with 01u00Southern U.S. hip hop artist Young Joc's02u00 grand entrance. And her powerful performance of "Get Up" from the dance movie 01i00Step UP02i00 took the audience's heart away.02br
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00 Is the underlined part OK? It seems that a writer has put a lot of stuff in one package of words, especially when he made a possession of the name after some adjectives. Should names of performances be in quotes and names of movies italicized? 0-
  

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0I would reply "yes" to all of your interrogatives. 0-

  • 0I would reply "yes" to all of your interrogatives.
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0I would reply "yes" to all of your interrogatives. In some magazines and newspapers, space is at a premium, and the style of a news item is often "condensed" - probably not very good prose.0-

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