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0One day, as I walked down an alley after work, a stray dog ran up to me and started attacking me. I pulled my taser out of my purse and zapped him. That poor thing limped for a week and he never dared to approach me again.02br
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00Are there any mistakes?02br
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00Also, can I say,02br
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00One day, I was walking down an alley after work 01i00when02i00 a stray dog ran up to me and started attacking me.02br
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00Thanks in advance!0-
  

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1i 00One day, as I walked down an alley after work, a stray dog ran up to me and started attacking me. I pulled my taser out of my purse and zapped him. 02i 0-

— Marius Hancu

  • 1i 00One day, as I walked down an alley after work, a stray dog ran up to me and started attacking me.
  • I pulled my taser out of my purse and zapped him.
  • 02i 0-
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1i00One day, as I walked down an alley after work, a stray dog ran up to me and started attacking me. I pulled my taser out of my purse and zapped him. 01b00The 02b00poor thing limped for a week and01b00 it02b00 01b00[can't be sure about its ***] 02b00never dared to approach me again.02i0-
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