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0Listen to me. This device transmits an encoded signal to the receiver, one that has been programmed to receive the signal from this device, and the receiver, in turn, responds with an encoded password that the transmiter will use to decrypt following messages from the receiver.02br02br00Are there any mistakes?02br02br00Thanks in advance!0-

Marius Hancu · Accepted Answer

0Listen to me isn't very polite. You may want to add a "please," or say "Please follow me." 02br
01i00Listen to me. This 01b00device, the transmitter02b00, transmits an encoded signal 01b00to the receiver that 02b00has been programmed to receive the signal from this device, and the receiver, in turn, responds with an encoded password that the transmiter will use to decrypt following messages from the receiver.02i02br
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01i01b00The transmitter02b00 transmits an encoded signal 01b00to the receiver that 02b00has been programmed to receive the signal from 01b00the transmitter02b00, and the receiver, in turn, responds with an encoded password that the transmiter will use to decrypt following messages from the receiver.02i0-

New2grammar · Answer

0Thanks MH. The sentence is clearly much better after the corrections.0-

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