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SpiKeRz Posted 19 years ago
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001. "It reminded me of Shaun’s voice, who is my cousin, and also of my fathers voice."02br
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002. "I already knew from books and papers that in the tropical forests, mixed-species flocks are present through the year, but to see it at first hand I wondered just why this occurred."02br
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003. "00The Chinese-Indian project—the first of it’s kind—met moderate success. However, the possibility remains that the interaction between two neighboring countries will have favorable consequences"02br
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01cite10SpiKeRz12cite10How to correct the following sentences ?12br
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101. "It reminded me of Shaun’s voice, who is my cousin, and also 10of 10my father11font10'12font10s voice."12br
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0 "It reminded me of Shaun’s voice, who is my cousin, and also of my fathers voice." - you are saying Shaun's voice is your cousin, not Shaun himself. Try re-arranging the sentence.02br
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002. "I already knew from books and papers that in the tropical forests, mixed-species flocks are present through the year, 00but 00to see00 it at first hand00 00I won
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01cite10SpiKeRz12cite10How to correct the following sentences ?12br
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101. "It reminded me of 11b11font10Shaun's as well as my father's voice--Shaun was my cousin.12font12b12br
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0How about: It reminded me of my cousin Shaun's voice, as well as that of my father.0-
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