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N2332858 Posted 23 years ago
Grammar
Sentence Correction
Dear Teachers,
Could you do grammatical corrections to the following sentences?
Thank You Very Much!!!
1.Through competition and comparison, can people obtain real happiness? Most people’s answer is negative.
2.Do comparisons with others make us happy? Most people gain the pleasure in a flash.
3.In fact, it is very hard for us to get some positive thoughts through competition unless we take the results lightly
4.The boredom in their minds will grow bigger and bigger.
By Yang Chih-Chieh
Could you do grammatical corrections to the following sentences?
Thank You Very Much!!!
1.Through competition and comparison, can people obtain real happiness? Most people’s answer is negative.
2.Do comparisons with others make us happy? Most people gain the pleasure in a flash.
3.In fact, it is very hard for us to get some positive thoughts through competition unless we take the results lightly
4.The boredom in their minds will grow bigger and bigger.
By Yang Chih-Chieh
Top answer
Hello Charlie, When you posted these questions on a new page I thought that perhaps you were looking for someone new to help you, but nobody has replied to your post, so I will do it now. 1. Can people obtain real happiness through competition and comparison?
- Hello Charlie, When you posted these questions on a new page I thought that perhaps you were looking for someone new to help you, but nobody has replied to your post, so I will do it now.
- 1.
- Can people obtain real happiness through competition and comparison?
- I think not.
- 2.
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Hello Charlie,
When you posted these questions on a new page I thought that perhaps you were looking
for someone new to help you, but nobody has replied to your post, so I will do it now.
1. Can people obtain real happiness through competition and comparison? I think not.
2. Do comparisons with others make us happy? Such pleasure is fleeting and transi
When you posted these questions on a new page I thought that perhaps you were looking
for someone new to help you, but nobody has replied to your post, so I will do it now.
1. Can people obtain real happiness through competition and comparison? I think not.
2. Do comparisons with others make us happy? Such pleasure is fleeting and transi
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