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Silak12 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correct?

Hi, everyone.

I read this sentence on this site:

https://www.dawn.com/news/1441902

" The mysterious trip happened a day before Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu made the first visit to Oman by an Israeli premier in over 20 years."

Is it correct? Or should it read: The mysterious trip happened a day before Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu made the first visit to Oman, making it the first visit by an Israeli premier in over 20 years.

Thank!

  

Top answer

It's correct. Your version is not. It wasn't the first visit.

— Clive

  • It's correct.
  • Your version is not.
  • It wasn't the first visit.
  • It was the first visit in over 20 years.
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It's correct.

Your version is not. It wasn't the first visit. It was the first visit in over 20 years.

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