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Rayman55 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Sentence correct

Does this make sense? "We shared our ebook with attendees of the event, which we sponsored, and are now pleased to make it available to download from our website immediately".
  

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Rayman55 We shared our e-b ook with attendees of the even t ( which ) we sponsore d. and We are now pleased to say the e-book make it is now available to for download from our websit e. immediately

  • Rayman55 We shared our e-b ook with attendees of the even t ( which ) we sponsore d.
  • and We are now pleased to say the e-book make it is now available to for download from our websit e.
  • immediately
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Rayman55We shared our e-book with attendees of the event (which) we sponsored. and We are now pleased to say the e-book make it is now available to for download from our website. immediately
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Thank you, teechr. Were there errors in my sentence? I typed
"immediately" as I want people to download the e-book ASAP. The sentence is from a marketing email.
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You can say "for immediate download" if you like, but I really think "immediate" would be redundant in that sentence.
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Thanks. I wondered if you thought it might be redundant because I typed "now". What I'm trying to say is that we gave the e-book to attendees of the event (which is named earlier in the email) and "now look what we've done - we' ve made it available for download. You can download it right now!"

We have sponsored many events, so that is why I put a comma before "which".

I would be
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OK, try this:
We shared our e-book with attendees of the event which we sponsored, and we are pleased to say the e-book is now available for immediate download from our website.
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Thank you. I am really grateful for your help, but I would still like to know about my original sentence. Getting feedback is the only way I am going to learn.

I thought "which" need a comma before it to make it clear that I am talking about that particular event. We have sponsored numerous events. I have now decided to name the event in that sentence.

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