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Rayman55 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Sentence correct?
Is this grammatically correct?
"At the heart of the industry since 2001, the company provides security services."
"At the heart of the industry since 2001, the company provides security services."
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" Grammatically, yes, but stylistically it's not so great. The final clause sounds too short, too curt to go with that fancy introductory phrase. For a better balance between clauses you might do better to write At the heart of the industry, the company has been providing security services since 2001.
- " Grammatically, yes, but stylistically it's not so great.
- The final clause sounds too short, too curt to go with that fancy introductory phrase.
- For a better balance between clauses you might do better to write At the heart of the industry, the company has been providing security services since 2001.
- CJ
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Rayman55 Is this grammatically correct?"At the heart of the industry since 2001, the company provides security services."Grammatically, yes, but stylistically it's not so great. The final clause sounds too short, too curt to go with that fancy introductory phrase. For a better balance between clauses you might do better to write
At the heart of
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