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Are these two sentences clear and worded correctly? FYI- Dalamar is the wizard. When her army attacked Palanthas in 357 AC, Kitiara used a nightjewel to enter the Tower of High Sorcery and tried to kill Dalamar, though he mortally wounded her in the process. Kitiara would have still been able to slay Dalamar, but Caramon’s knowledge of the future enabled him to save the wizard’s life.