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Sampai012 Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Sentence construction

This issue keep arising and not resolved, shows complete negligence on your part.



Is it okay to use comma like this , shows and then use a verb to start a new sentence and complete it?

Also if this is correct, can someone please give small example of atleast two sentence connected and concluded by a verb or whatever creative in a similar way.


Thanks

  

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Here are two ways to write that: That the issue keeps arising and is never resolved shows complete negligence on your part. That sentence is somewhat literary in style. A more everyday version goes like this: It shows complete negligence on your part that the issue keeps arising and is never resolved.

— CalifJim

  • Here are two ways to write that: That the issue keeps arising and is never resolved shows complete negligence on your part.
  • That sentence is somewhat literary in style.
  • A more everyday version goes like this: It shows complete negligence on your part that the issue keeps arising and is never resolved.
  • In this second version we move the subject (the that -clause) to the end and put "it" at the beginning.
  • CJ
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Here are two ways to write that:

That the issue keeps arising and is never resolved shows complete negligence on your part.

That sentence is somewhat literary in style. A more everyday version goes like this:

It shows complete negligence on your part that the issue keeps arising and is never resolved.

In this second version we move the subject (the

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