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Can someone check the whole paragraph and especially comment on whether the highlighted sentence makes sense?
"For the past 14 years, I was reluctant to go over to the kitchen , grab a glass, fill it with pure drinking water and gulp it all down the throat! Lazy, I’d have to say. But in recent years I got to know how important water is for your health and especially for your brain so I was aware of that but still reluctant to drink water. Until yesterday, I wasn't"
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Grammatically speaking, there aren't any real errors, but there are problems with the entire paragraph. The highlighted sentence makes sense, but it isn't very well written. It is important that it can be understood.
- Grammatically speaking, there aren't any real errors, but there are problems with the entire paragraph.
- The highlighted sentence makes sense, but it isn't very well written.
- It is important that it can be understood.
- For the past 14 years, I've been reluctant to go into the kitchen, get a glass, fill it with pure drinking water, and gulp it all down.
- (This sentence makes sense, but I don't understand it in the sense that someone wouldn't do that.
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Grammatically speaking, there aren't any real errors, but there are problems with the entire paragraph. The highlighted sentence makes sense, but it isn't very well written. It is important that it can be understood.
For the past 14 years, I've been reluctant to go into the kitchen, get a glass, fill it with pure drinking water, and gulp it all down. (This sentence makes sense, but I don
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