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Pvunderink Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Sentence construction?

Can someone please check the construction of my sentence?

"So, intuitively this suggests that the fixed effects estimator effectively controls for all time-invariant omitted variables that drive the dependent variable (without the researcher having to know/identify these omitted variables), which reduces concerns over omitted variable bias."
  

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Largely this looks OK to me. If "fixed effects estimator" means "estimator of fixed effects", I suggest writing as "fixed-effects estimator" to avoid possible reading as "effects estimator that is fixed". In formal writing I would avoid separating words with slashes.

  • Largely this looks OK to me.
  • If "fixed effects estimator" means "estimator of fixed effects", I suggest writing as "fixed-effects estimator" to avoid possible reading as "effects estimator that is fixed".
  • In formal writing I would avoid separating words with slashes.
  • You could write "know or identify", but "identify" alone seems to be sufficient.
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Largely this looks OK to me. If "fixed effects estimator" means "estimator of fixed effects", I suggest writing as "fixed-effects estimator" to avoid possible reading as "effects estimator that is fixed". In formal writing I would avoid separating words with slashes. You could write "know or identify", but "identify" alone seems to be sufficient.

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