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Vijay Marathe Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Sentence construction

Hi,

Could anyone please tell me if this is correct!

Visitors can indulge in reading, get inspired by participating in workshops, hear upcoming authors and discuss their favourite literary works.

Thanks,

Vijay
  

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Hi, It's basically OK. Does 'their favourite books' refer to those of the visitors, or of the authors? Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, It's basically OK.
  • Does 'their favourite books' refer to those of the visitors, or of the authors?
  • Clive
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Hi,

It's basically OK. Does 'their favourite books' refer to those of the visitors, or of the authors?

Clive
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Thanks Clive,

I mean to say that the visitors can discuss their favourite books at the literary fest.

How would the sentence be, now, with the above meaning?

Vijay
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Hi,
Visitors can indulge in reading, get inspired by participating in workshops, hear upcoming authors and discuss their favourite literary works.
I'd say this.
Visitors can indulge in reading, discuss their favourite literary works, get inspired by participating in workshops, and hear upcoming authors.


Upcoming - coming later in time, according to
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Hi,

Sure, this sounds much better.

Thanks,

Vijay
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